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Hi, this blog is an online record of some of the works I have written. I've started off by sharing some of my poetry and I will also be adding short stories, children books and chapters of novels as I complete them. I have a diverse and general interest in all types of writing and hope to one day see one of my works published.
Please feel free to comment on any of the posts as I am eager for feedback. This is the first time I've ever publicly shared anything I've written and so haven't yet heard any oppinions from others- good or bad. I'd love to hear whether you liked or even hated what you read and what you think are the strengths/weaknesses of any of the pieces. Please do not hold back (although please try not to be needlessly hurtfull! Like I say I'm new to this!)
Above anything else I hope to achieve with this blog, I hope that whoever stumbles across it will enjoy reading one if not all of my works.
Thanks,
Jessica Paul.

Sunday, 24 July 2011

The Ocean

In this boat I sail alone, out on the ocean so far from home.
These waters were once so abundant and sprightly,
We rode the tide of crashing waves, clinging tightly.
Now the waves no more upsurge,
They do not brim and toil with urge.
The waters now lay barren and still.
All beings once there no more the ocean fill.
The oceanic outlook from this boat is grim.
The once bright sky, now hazy and dim.
The wooden boat, weighed down with waterlog
is colder than ever as it drifts in the fog.
I search in vain to find a way back;
my direction lost from a clairvoyance lack.
You no more are by my side
as I struggle to navigate the silent tide.
I did not see when you abandoned ship,
or notice as you loosened your grip.
Now left to be a lonely fool,
drifting in an ocean, cold and cruel.

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